Searria H.

Hi! I hope you're enjoying the site so far. :D Sorry it took me so long to review this. *feels lame* For such a short poem, you conveyed a complete, ...

Hi, kendallelise! It looks like you've already gotten some great feedback on this, so I'll try not to repeat anything. :D I really liked it! You had a very unusual ...

First of all, chocolate goldfish? Ew. ;) But my dog eats goldfish! Oh, yeah...chapter. Right. ;) Something wet and fuzzy was on my forehead. "Was" is a very weak "be" ...

Hello again! *rubs hands together eagerly* Okay, let's get started. :D I liked the action in this as well. You kept my interest, added just the right amount of suspense. ...

Hello! Sea here to review. :D I thought this was very nice. I liked the way it began and evolved. Throwing in the lyrics after paragraphs every so often was ...

Hello, Noelle. Short stories is a great way to shake a bad case of writers block. Plus, it's fun to introduce yourself to new characters and settings after writing one ...

Hello again, Nutmeg! Yay! I get to be the first one to review this chapter. :) I found myself smiling a lot more in this chapter. I think *says tentatively* ...

Hi, Ariel. Here as requested. ^^' I don't know much about poetry, but I'll do my best. I also like the simplicity of this poem. Oftentimes poets can get so ...

Here I am again. :D I don't know. Your style of chapter titling is starting to grow on me. :) I liked the way you introduced your new character. You ...

'Ello, June. :) I personally love mythology, and I think you did a nice job of capturing the attitude of the Romans. I took Latin, and technically "animus" is a ...

'Ello again, Nutmegan! You did a better job in this chapter of letting the reader develop connections with the characters before throwing them into a bunch of action. :) The ...

Hi, Nutmegan! I like this fresh take on vampires. Normally, when I read a vampire/werewolf story, I think "Oh, great. Another one." But not today. :D I thank you for ...

Hi, there. :) I love your title; it really caught my attention. I think you have a good idea in there, but I feel as though you were trying too ...

Hi, Brie! I'm glad I picked this piece to do my first review as your former mentor. :D The concept of this piece is very nice, and it's (I know ...

Hi there, Maimoona! You did a nice job of conveying your emotion in such a short space without "telling" the reader. I have some very nit-picky things to point out. ...